Yesterday, nagpresent kami ng poem na consist of kinds of figurative speech. Our theme was all about 'new moon' type. Kinuha ko kase sa new moon na book and then, I made a poem out of the words there. Fortunately, nakakuha ako ng copy from Vince's Group. Napakaganda ng concept nila kaya, 98 ata' cla. eniweiz, eto na yung poem nila..
Roses are red, Violets are blue
I never thought I would see a girl like you.
Oh cupid,cupid,cupid, please strike at me again,
To lighten up my heart in vain;
The sun and stars smiles when you passed by,
With the wind singing a little lullaby;
Your lips is as red as a rose,
And that's what I like the most;
Now, I proposed my love for you,
Even wrote in my heart, the words "I Love You"
You never said a thing and left me alone,
Didn't say goodbye and left my head with mourn;
My love caused pain,
Sorrow is all I gain
I was with you all along,
And now, where are you when I needed YOU?
Two years has passed and I heard you were sick,
I rushed to the hospital lightning quick,
I saw your rosy lips now so pale,
My mouth ran out of words to say;
Rain suddenly poured outside,
The pattering rain is all I can hear
And you said there's no reason to be feared
Still You didn't say what you want inside
You closed your eyes and lost your breath ,
I guess we were not to be meant;
But if that's how it's gonna be,
Then time won't be the thing to me;
Written by Vince Almore Arboleda' Danda nu? Mas lalo pa akong nailove sa kanya. haha. :)
Check out nyu blog ni Pat, nakapost yung kanila dun. Here's my poem naman na nirecite namin sa harapan.. Aku gumawa, as usual.
I was trapped in a nightmare,
Where I let the dove flee and I was standing there,
No one hears the echoes of my tears,
When I met my terrifying fears..
My past is a blurred film that reminds me,
That You've said forever you and me will be;
"Where you are is a right place for me"
But if feels like a long mile to see.
Loneliness is coming, Loneliness will tear me,
"Love, love, love, I'm so so sorry"
Was this the worst I can live through? I murmured,
After all, abandoned and abjured..
The leaves on the ground shuddered,
"Forget me." He ordered
I could hear the blood pounding faster,
As the raindrops from the clouds patter..
The sun continues to climb in the sky,
After many years, again, we looked eye to eye;
This was heaven right smack in the middle of the hell,
As if there had never been a wound in the first place,
Again.. I FELL.
I never thought I would see a girl like you.
Oh cupid,cupid,cupid, please strike at me again,
To lighten up my heart in vain;
The sun and stars smiles when you passed by,
With the wind singing a little lullaby;
Your lips is as red as a rose,
And that's what I like the most;
Now, I proposed my love for you,
Even wrote in my heart, the words "I Love You"
You never said a thing and left me alone,
Didn't say goodbye and left my head with mourn;
My love caused pain,
Sorrow is all I gain
I was with you all along,
And now, where are you when I needed YOU?
Two years has passed and I heard you were sick,
I rushed to the hospital lightning quick,
I saw your rosy lips now so pale,
My mouth ran out of words to say;
Rain suddenly poured outside,
The pattering rain is all I can hear
And you said there's no reason to be feared
Still You didn't say what you want inside
You closed your eyes and lost your breath ,
I guess we were not to be meant;
But if that's how it's gonna be,
Then time won't be the thing to me;
Written by Vince Almore Arboleda' Danda nu? Mas lalo pa akong nailove sa kanya. haha. :)
Check out nyu blog ni Pat, nakapost yung kanila dun. Here's my poem naman na nirecite namin sa harapan.. Aku gumawa, as usual.
I was trapped in a nightmare,
Where I let the dove flee and I was standing there,
No one hears the echoes of my tears,
When I met my terrifying fears..
My past is a blurred film that reminds me,
That You've said forever you and me will be;
"Where you are is a right place for me"
But if feels like a long mile to see.
Loneliness is coming, Loneliness will tear me,
"Love, love, love, I'm so so sorry"
Was this the worst I can live through? I murmured,
After all, abandoned and abjured..
The leaves on the ground shuddered,
"Forget me." He ordered
I could hear the blood pounding faster,
As the raindrops from the clouds patter..
The sun continues to climb in the sky,
After many years, again, we looked eye to eye;
This was heaven right smack in the middle of the hell,
As if there had never been a wound in the first place,
Again.. I FELL.
Lala. Comments..!! lav lav! new moon diba? Reference o po.. we got 93 lan ih'. haist. At least I try my best, anhirap kaseng gumawa ng poem if wala kang nararamdam, Sana kung last week.. I still remembered it. :(
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